História: Escrever mensagens longas e claras

Nível: B2

The first draft

Rafael was writing to the care team about a follow-up appointment for an older patient. In the opening paragraph, he explained the context: the patient had several questions and needed more time to understand the plan. His main point was that a longer review could make the next step clearer.

Evidence and position

Rafael included the observation record as a supporting detail and noted that the family had requested a clearer explanation. In light of that information, he recommended a two-week follow-up. He used a respectful tone and admitted that the busy clinic would limit the available appointment times.

A specific request

Rafael asked whether the team could reserve a longer appointment and help him explain the plan to the family. As a result, the coordinator knew exactly what decision was needed and by when. Rafael promised to follow up the next week if he did not receive an answer.

Notas de vocabulário

• the opening paragraph — o parágrafo inicial
• to make a care plan clearer — tornar um plano de cuidado mais claro
• by when — para quando / até que data

Prática com a história

1. Una com however: The clinic is busy. It can host a short review.
2. Escreva uma frase em inglês que anuncie um pedido específico no fim de uma mensagem clínica.